11th week

This week all ogf the students were in a hurry. Because we were suppose to give second essay's first drafts. First lecture of the week was same as the week before the first essay. Mr. O'Regan talked about the things we should do and we shouldn't while we are writing our essays. He said our essay look like coban salad which is not mixed or even chopped. That's why he advised us to combine the ideas of Ben Ze'ev and Whitty, by ours.

Then Mr. O'Regan gave us examples of bad titles or introduction sentences, however not an example of good. I think if he present some good examples it would be helpful. I also think Mr. O'Regan can teach us more on writing essays. My writing skills are from the high school and last year of my high school because of OSS I didn't get any english lessons. I wasn't in ELC in the Koc so I don't have that much writing skills. If he could show some technics to me I'll be glad. Only technic I learned, which actually no one told me but I used to it, is Toefl type of essay. Except this critique I think Mr. O'Regan is being helpful while we are on the writing process. With his critiques I change some of my first writings..

I believe that Comm101 will be helpful for myu academic carrier and Comm102 however if I could learn more writing skills everything would be easier for me.